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Flustered, Frazzled, but not yet Freaked

JapanThat pretty much describes my state of mind at the moment. It always seems like things pile up in publishing and hit you all at once. It wouldn’t normally be so bad, but right now I’m trying to prepare for a trip to Tokyo with my DH.

Yep, you heard right. We’re off to the Land of the Rising Sun on Friday! So exciting! Of course, I’ll be snapping pictures and promise to give you a running commentary on what I find there, as I did when we went to Amsterdam in 2010. But I’m a small town girl at heart and I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t a little trepidacious about visiting a city of 12 million souls!

So aside from packing and planning, what’s up that has me more frenetic than usual?

Touch of a Rogue

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First of all, I’m preparing for Touch of a Rogue‘s release day on Feb. 28th! I’ve got something really special planned for you on that Tuesday. Staring at 7 AM EST, there’ll be a new blog post here every hour and giveaways and prizes to go with it!

You’ll be treated to my writing buddies–Shana Galen, Vicky Dreiling, Vanessa Kelly, Monica Burns, Cheryl Holt, Kris Kennedy, Zoe Archer, Katharine Ashe, Heather Snow, Grace Burrowes, and Alexandra Hawkins. They’ll all be here to help me celebrate the release of Touch of a Rogue, the second book in the Touch of Seduction series.

I had great fun catching up with what they’re working on now. Bet you’ll enjoy it too (and you just may win one of the hourly prizes!) , so be sure to mark your calendar and plan to pop by here each hour for a new post on Feb. 28th! Please tell your reading friends, too!

Touch of a Scoundrel

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I just received the copy edits back for Touch of a Scoundrel (July 31, 2012) and wouldn’t you know it? My editor would like the manuscript back by March 6th. Good thing I have a couple 20 hour flights in my near future! ;-)

Have you ever seen anything quite as gorgeous as this cover? I’ve loved all my Touch of Seduction covers, but they definitely saved the best for last!

I’ve been fortunate to receive cover quotes from authors I admire for all the Touch of Seduction stories–Victoria Alexander for Touch of a Thief, Jennifer Ashley for Touch of a Rogue, and for Touch of Seduction, the incomparable Mary Jo Putney gave me a terrific nod. I’m a lucky girl and I know it!

Erinsong

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I’m also working through the manuscript for ErinSong. This is the second Songs of the North story and I hope to be able to offer it to you as an ebook sometime in late March.

This book first came out in 2006 and needless to say, my writing style has evolved since then. I’m tightening up my prose and enjoying my reunion with my Irish princess, Brenna and her Northman, Jorand.

This book received a Desert Isle Keeper Designation from All About Romance, a notoriously tough review site, so I’m pretty proud of it.

Waking up with a RakeLast month, we turned in the manuscript for Waking Up with a Rake, the first in my collaborative series with New York Times bestselling author Connie Mason called The Royal Rakes.  Now we’re deep into Romanced by a Rake, and whether I’m here or half-way to Tokyo, there are page count goals to be met.

I predict I will not be watching the movie on my 20 hour flight.

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Forbidden Love Stories

MaidenSong

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In Old Norse culture, love stories were called ‘maidensongs’ and they were actually forbidden in some regions. They were seen as stories too powerful to tell because love was the most powerful thing in Midgard (the Viking word for our world. It roughly translates to Middle Earth. Hello, Tolkien!)

I’m sharing a bit more from MaidenSong today. If you haven’t been following the blog and need to catch up, here’s the IQ test. Follow these links to read what comes before this excerpt:
Prologue
Chapter 1-First scene

Ready to go forward? Here’s the rest of Chapter 1.

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“I suppose you call yourself a hero and imagine a saga will be composed about your exploits. All you are is a murderer and a thief,” Rika railed at Bjorn, hoping to shame him.

She knew baiting the man was foolhardy, but only her focused hatred of Bjorn the Black kept her on her feet. She couldn’t be silent. Words had always been her only weapon. White-hot rage boiled out of her, whether it was wise or not.

“Are there no more monasteries on the Isle of the Angles?” Her voice bordered on shrill. “No more fat Frankish towns for you to plunder that you must stoop to murder of your own kind?”

“If I were a murderer, your big friend here would be joining Magnus on his pyre,” Bjorn said with icy calm. “I’ve done no murder. I did what had to be done. I lift my hand only against those who oppose me. And as for being a thief, it’s no theft to take back your own.”

When they reached the ship, Bjorn turned to face the smoldering village. The survivors huddled in mis­erable clumps.

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“People of Hordaland! We’ve fallen upon you be­cause of your raid on Sognefjord last month.” His deep voice reverberated on the mountainside. “The Jarl of Sogna has a long arm. In his name, we’ve taken back the livestock that was stolen and punished the guilty. Don’t make the mistake of trying us again. The men of Sogna will not stand for it.”

Bjorn thrust his sword into its scabbard and bound a sniffling Ketil’s hands together with a leather strap. When he turned to tie Rika, she jerked away from him.

“Fine sentiments, Bjorn the Black.” She fired the words at him like arrows. “And what of the innocents you punished with the guilty?”

“I advise you to give me your hands, girl.” He met her frosty stare with one of his own. “And see you give me no further cause to bind your mouth as well.”

Rika clamped her lips together, giving him no ex­cuse to gag her. She submitted to the leather strap Bjorn knotted around her wrists, glowering at him when he pulled it tight. Then Rika climbed into the swaying longship and hunkered near the prow. She wanted to put as much distance as possible between herself and that dark-eyed fiend.

His crew bent to the work and hauled away. Once the vessel was far enough from land, they shipped the oars, locked the mast into place and hoisted the big square sail. A stiff breeze filled the woolen cloth and the ship came alive, lifting in the water despite its full load. The keel of the dragonship sliced through the gray swells, the waves dividing like the wings of an ea­gle on each side of the craft. It rode lightly on the sea, as though at any moment it might rise and take flight.

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Rika had always loved sailing with Ketil and Mag­nus in their little coracle, the sharp scent of the sea and the cries of gulls wheeling overhead. Her whole life had been one long voyage, interspersed with pleas­urable stays as welcome guests. At Magnus’s side, she was greeted with something akin to awe. The old skald’s mantle was broad, easily covering his little fam­ily of foundlings. Even the lack-witted Ketil was shel­tered under its protection.

Now that part of her life was at an end. In the prow of the dragonship where the sea spray would obscure them, she wept silent tears for the only fa­ther she’d ever known.

A few tears fell on her own behalf as well. Rika had tumbled from the high status position of the old skald’s daughter to the hopeless condition of a thrall. She was now the property of some faceless jarl and might expect even worse treatment than the captured livestock.

Ketil curled up beside her to sleep, as he often did in a rolling ship. His pale eyelashes quivered against his ruddy cheeks. Rika’s chest tightened. Ketil was so big and strong, though he had but a child’s heart and mind, easily hurt and confused. How could she hope to protect him in their new and bewildering circum­stances? She had no idea, but she knew she must try. Right alongside her father’s tutelage in the lore and legends of the Norse people, Magnus had taught her loyalty.

Oh, Father! Why had she argued with him that morning? And over so trivial a thing. Magnus had in­sisted she try harder to memorize the Havamal, the sayings of Odin. The sagas of heroes were more to her taste than the homilies of the One-Eyed All-Father. Now she’d happily learn a thousand of them if she could only take back her harsh words.

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A prickle started at the nape of her neck and tingled down her spine. She turned to seek the source of her unease. At the far end of the dragonship, Bjorn the Black stared at her from his seat at the steering oar. She’d felt his eyes, hot and intrusive on her skin. They were darker than a bog and more menacing. She was forced to look away.

Rika was usually good at reading people. As a per­former, she had to be. She’d seen desire in men’s eyes before, but this was different. She couldn’t decipher the meaning of his intense gaze. The dead stare of Bjorn the Black was more like the look of a wolf stalk­ing a hapless kid who’d strayed too far from the rest of the flock. In spite of the sun on her shoulders, she shivered.

Surely someone in the settlement where they were bound would’ve heard Magnus perform. Perhaps they might also recognize her and Ketil. This whole misun­derstanding could be laid to rest. She shot a glance from under her lashes at Bjorn, who now strained to keep his ship out of the pounding surf. Perhaps she’d even be able to charge him with murder before the Lawspeaker and demand a wergild for the life of her father. Someone must be held accountable for the death of so great a personage as Magnus, and Bjorn was clearly in charge of this murderous raid. With any luck, she’d even see the blackguard banished.

She swiped away her tears. Her lips flattened into a hard line, along with her resolve. Her dream of being recognized as a skald in her own right suddenly seemed a small matter indeed. But seeing justice done to the man responsible for her father’s death was the best reason she could think of to keep breathing.

The setting sun slid beyond the curve of the water. Before the brief twilight deepened into the short Scan­dinavian spring night, Bjorn ordered the flotilla to pull up as close to the land as the sailors dared. The cliffs were too steep to beach the armada for the night.

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Bjorn grappled with the heavy anchor stone and heaved it overboard. “Break out the nattmal, Jorand,” he said to the flaxen-haired youngest man on board.

As Jorand passed out the spartan meal of flat barley bread, dried fish and wrinkled cloudberries, Bjorn stepped around the crew to check on his captives.

“Hold up your hands and I’ll free you to eat,” he said to Rika.

Scowling, she lifted her hands to him, but said noth­ing. “What? No cutting remarks?” Bjorn cocked his head at her. “Out of insults already, I see. You must not be much of a skald after all.” He ignored Rika’s uplifted wrists and freed Ketil’s hands instead.

“Anything I might say would stir your wrath, Bjorn the Hero, vanquisher of defenseless women and unarmed old men.” Rika’s tone was smooth as butter, making her words all the more biting. “However, if it pleases the great jarl’s brother, I’ll compose a saga about his restoration of livestock to be remembered for the ages. You’ll be known as Bjorn the Boar-bringer, savior of lost pigs everywhere.”

When a couple of his crew chuckled, he silenced them with a frown.

She slid her gaze toward the sailors, who had erased the grins from their faces. “Ah! I see it is not only bound captives who must be careful with their mouths around you.”

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“Seems you’re giving no heed to yours, girl.” Bjorn knelt beside her and lowered his voice. “I don’t know why I should bother explaining it to you, but this was a matter of honor. What a man has, he must hold. If he won’t protect what’s his, he deserves to lose it. We couldn’t let the raid on our farmsteads stand. More would be lost than livestock the next time.”

“Ja,” she answered, dry-eyed and staring, the image of her father face down in the straw swimming before her. “More was definitely lost.”

Bjorn seemed to see the same grotesque vision. “It’s a sad day that sees Magnus Silver-Throat dead, if that’s indeed who he was. But you know as well as I that it’s something that couldn’t be undone. We all wear our fates around our necks like you wear that little hammer.”

He reached out a broad finger to stroke the amber pendant nestled in the slight indentation at the base of her throat. When she shrank from his touch, he pulled back his hand.

“The way of Magnus’s death was decided long ago,” Bjorn said. “It just happened that one of my men de­livered it to him.”

Rika narrowed her eyes to slits. “And for that, I’ll never forgive you.”

“I’m not asking you to,” Bjorn said. “I’m only trying to untie your hands so you can eat in comfort.” He worked the knot free and pulled off her bonds.

“I’m surprised you trouble to feed us.” Rika rubbed her tingling wrists.

“If you’re weak or sickly, you’re of no use to the jarl. You’ll find I look out for all of my brother’s interests,” Bjorn said. “But perhaps I should warn you that Gunnar’s not as tolerant a man as I. If you irritate me, I’ll just bind your mouth.”

“What?” Rika’s eyes flashed. “Will the mighty jarl carve out my tongue and eat it with his herring and turnips for nattmal?”

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“No. Something much worse than that.” Bjorn handed her a generous portion of fish, bread and berries. “He’ll set the Dragon of Sogna on you. His wife, the Lady Astryd.”

This time, Bjorn’s crew laughed heartily and loud.

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“No!” Ketil thrashed beside her in the dark. She wrapped her arms around him, trying to quiet him be­fore he roused the wrath of any of the raiders snoring in their hudfats, the leather two-man sleeping sacks.

“Hush now, Ketil,” she whispered. “It’s just a dreyma.”

Ketil subsided into soft sobs, his great body still shuddering. “Don’t let it happen.”

She bit her lower lip, thinking he spoke of Magnus’s death and imagined it only a dream. “Some things can’t be helped,” she said softly. “Father is gone, and we can’t change it.”

He pulled back from her, blinking. “I know that. I just don’t want you to go, too. They’re trying to send you far away to a big, big city with a wall where the sun burns so hot. And they won’t let me go with you.”

“It’s only a dream.” She pressed her palms against both of his cheeks. “No one will separate us, brother. I won’t let them.”

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Even as she promised, she wondered whether she’d be able to keep her word. A thrall had no say in where she was sent, but Rika had no intention of remaining a slave. Almost in reflex, she put a hand to the amber hammer at her throat. If she’d been destined for servi­tude, surely Thor wouldn’t have allowed Magnus to save her from the icy water as an infant.

Magnus had always been Odin’s man. But even though the stoic All-Father was a favorite of skalds, Rika could never warm to him. From her birth, she’d belonged to Thor, whose passions burned white-hot and dissipated like fading lightning. Of all the gods in the Nordic pantheon, the Thunderer was the least capricious and cruel to his devotees, and judged most likely to save them in a tight spot.

This certainly qualified as a tight spot.

A fresh wind stirred the sea, sending its chilly breath rippling over them. Ketil shivered beside her. “I’m cold.”

“Here you are.” Rika pulled the green wool cape from her shoulders and tucked it around her brother. It wasn’t big enough for the two of them.

“Go back to sleep, Ketil.” She crossed her arms over her chest, hugging herself against the wind. In a short while, his deep, even breathing told Rika that Ketil had slipped back into his childish slumber.

Ketil’s nightmare troubled her more than she wanted to admit. Magnus had been devoted to truth-telling above all else, so he was never evasive about how she’d come to be his daughter. He told Rika that one of Ketil’s dreams had led them to the precise spot where she’d been abandoned on the ice. Her brother hadn’t had another episode of prescience since then, so Rika discounted the tale as the fancies of a doting father with a vivid imagination. Now with Ketil’s dreyma of a looming separation, she wondered.

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The moon rose, cold and distant, over the steep cliffs and crashing surf. The silvery light was just bright enough for Rika to make out Bjorn the Black in his leather sleeping sack by the steering oar. The man’s eyes flashed at her, fiery and threatening, like the feral predator she knew him to be. When he stood and walked toward her carrying his hudfat, her shivering had nothing to do with the wind.

“Get in.” He stepped into the bag and held it open for her.

She glared up at him. “I’ll tie loom stones around my neck and drown myself before I become your bed-slave.”

“Don’t worry. I don’t intend to rut you,” Bjorn said. “Not in a bobbing longship with two dozen other men around.”

When she still didn’t budge, his lips twitched, whether with irritation or amusement, Rika couldn’t be sure.

“Rape isn’t to my taste,” he explained. “I prefer my women willing and a good bit cleaner than you are at the moment, little she-wolf.” He stroked a patch of dried mud from her cheek.

It was spring, but the breeze sliding over her felt more like winter’s icy breath. Rika didn’t want him to see her quiver, but she couldn’t help herself.

“There’s no profit to you to spite me in this,” he said. “I only want to see you warm, I swear it.”

Her chattering teeth decided the matter and she climbed into the supple leather sack with the black Viking. The hudfat was designed for sharing bodily warmth so she stopped shivering in only a few moments. The big man seemed to radiate as much heat as a roaring central fire in a longhouse.

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Earlier, he’d removed his mail shirt and the blood­stained tunic beneath it, leaving him smelling only of fresh sea air, tinged with honest male sweat. It was a strangely comforting combination. Even though he was her enemy, his warmth made Rika drowsy. She settled back against his chest as she sank toward ex­hausted sleep.

“Why did you do that?” his voice rumbled in her ear.

Every hair on her body stood at full attention. She should’ve known better than to trust him enough to climb into the hudfat with him..

“I was cold. You promised only to warm me,” she reminded him. “Nothing else could lure me into your bed.”

He snorted. “There are those who could assure you that my bed is not such an odious fate, but that’s not what I meant.” Bjorn jerked his head toward Ketil. “I know you were cold. Why did you give him your cloak?”

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“He’s my brother,” Rika answered simply. “We share everything. That’s what families do.”

“Very touching.” His voice was hard. “But not very practical when there’s only one cloak.”

She turned to look at him. The lines and planes of his face were as stony as the granite cliffs they shel­tered under. “Wouldn’t you share a cloak with your brother?”

Bjorn’s dark eyes flickered down at her and then back up to scan the sea again. “No. My brother would just take the cloak.”

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Maidensong~A Prologue

MaidenSong

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Maidensong was my debut title back in 2006 with Dorchester Publishing. Despite the troubles that publisher has been through, I’ll always be grateful to them for giving me my start. However, I’m thrilled to have the rights to Maidensong back again so I can offer it to you as an affordable eBook.

I wrote Maidensong before I realized the majority of historical romance readers were strictly Regency fans. I was fascinated by the lore and legends of the Norse culture, so I set my story in 9th century Scandinavia, home of the Vikings. Since it’s so different than what most romance fans are used to, I’m offering several days of excerpts to give you good taste of the story. If you’re the adventurous sort, I invite you to come with me to visit love in the Dark Ages. As Rika, my skaldic heroine, would say, “I give you . . . Maidensong.”

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The babe wailed again.

“There, lamb,” Helge whispered as she sponged the last of the slick fluids off the enraged little body. Flick­ering light from the central fire kissed the newborn and danced across the smoke-blackened beams of the longhouse.

The old midwife sighed. However difficult the babe’s entry into the world had been, she was at least a healthy child, perfectly formed with all her fingers and toes. A crest of coppery hair was plastered to her damp head.

“Hush you, now,” Helge coaxed.

The wrinkled little face puckered and the newborn shrieked as if Loki, the trickster godling, had just pinched her bottom. Helge wrapped the child snugly in a cat-skin blanket, crooning urgent endearments.

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“Shut the brat up,” Torvald said, his voice a broken shadow of its usual booming timbre. All the souls shel­tered in the longhouse went expectantly silent. As if she sensed menace in the air, the child subsided into moist hiccups.

“Will you not hold your daughter?” Helge offered the small bundle to Torvald. “She’s a fine child, fair and lusty.”

“No, I’ll not.” Torvald knuckled his eyes. “She’s killed my Gudrid. I’ll have naught to do with her.” When he looked at the mewling babe, his face was a mask of loathing. “Put her out.”

Helge flinched. “But, my lord—”

“Don’t argue with me, woman. Am I not chief over my own house?” Torvald’s gray eyes blazed with a po­tent mix of fury and grief. “I said, put her out.”

Helge’s shoulders sagged. She couldn’t remember the last time a healthy child had been exposed. But Torvald was master here, so there was nothing for it but to do his bidding.

Still, it didn’t seem right to consign the babe to Hel empty-handed. It was bad enough that she’d go unloved and unmourned to that shadowy, icy place. Even worse, she’d arrive there as a pauper.

Helge laid her little charge on the bedding, and un­tied the thin strip of leather from the dead woman’s slim neck.

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The pendant was a simple little amber hammer, its only distinctive mark a tiny purple orchid trapped for­ever in the glowing stone. Perhaps Thor would mark the child for his protection if she met her death wear­ing his talisman. It wasn’t much, but it was all Helge could do for the mite.

She bundled herself against the cold and left the longhouse bearing her whimpering burden. The stiff hairs in her nostrils froze with each breath.

The thought of leaving the child for the wolves made Helge’s chest constrict smartly. She decided to let the sea take her. It would be clean and quick. There’d be less chance of hearing the child’s keening death wail on the wind. And the unhappy little soul would find it harder to trouble those who’d disowned her with malicious tricks later, as some malevolent ghosts were known to do.

Snow crunched underfoot as Helge trudged down to the shore where the fjord was choked with ice. Armed with an ax she picked up as she passed the woodpile, Helge carried the babe as close to the edge of the floe as she dared.

“Good-bye, little elf,” Helge said as she placed the newborn on the smooth, cold surface. “Thor keep you, for I cannot.”

She brought the sharp ax down with a thwack. The brittle ice shattered in a jagged line and separated from the main body of the floe. Helge gave it a nudge with the ax handle.

She watched with a gathering heaviness in her chest as, bobbing and dipping, the tiny bundle on the ice sheet floated out with the tide.

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Magnus Silver-Throat, lately court poet to the King of the Danes, pushed back the wiry strand of white hair that drifted across his weathered face. He didn’t really believe in Ketil’s dreams, he told himself. And yet last month when the boy had vehemently insisted they not put to sea on a cloudless day, he’d indulged his son’s fancy. A violent squall had come up that afternoon that surely would’ve swamped their small craft had Magnus kept to his original plan. Ketil’s current dreyma wasn’t nearly so specific. Only that they had to be in this precise spot.

Magnus squinted against the glare of the cold northern sun on the water, not quite believing what he thought he saw. “Ketil, look you starboard and tell me what’s there.”

The nine-year-old twisted on his sea trunk and gazed in the direction his foster-father pointed. His simple face screwed into a frown. “Something on the ice.”

A thin wail floated over the water to his ear.

“It cries,” Ketil said.

Magnus’ mouth tightened as he adjusted the steering oar to swing toward the bobbing mound of fur. “See if you can fetch it out, son. Be careful.”

The boy moved clumsily to the prow of the small boat and leaned over the edge. As they neared the bundle, Ketil grabbed it and hauled it aboard. He weaved back to Magnus.

The man peeled away the soggy wrappings, his mouth fixed in a grim line. The babe was blue with cold, but she stopped whimpering long enough to fasten her pale green eyes on him. His old heart was forever lost in that instant.

“It looks like we’ve fished up a Pictish princess,” he said to the boy. “I don’t think she could be any bluer if we dipped her headfirst in woad.”

“Can we keep it?” Ketil asked, his mouth hanging open. His soft heart always wanted to keep and care for little lost creatures.

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“It’s difficult to return a gift from the gods,” Magnus said. “They tend to resent it when you try. Especially since they apparently went to a lot of trouble to send us to find this one.”

As he said it, he eyed the coastline, wondering what calamity could lead someone to abandon such a goodly child. Magnus removed the cat-skin blanket and tucked the babe into the folds of his own warm cloak. Then he reefed the coracle around smartly.

“Winter is harder here than I expected, son.” He searched the shoreline for a clue as to which settlement in the deep fjord had expelled this tiniest of its members. “Hard winters can lead to hard hearts. I believe we’ll fare better going south.”

“But we had to come here, Father,” Ketil said insistently. “I dreamed it.”

“So you did, son,” Magnus said, pondering the gods’ wisdom in giving the boy this unusual gift when they had denied him normal intelligence. He glanced down at the tiny girl, whose skin was already regaining a healthy pink color, sheltering peacefully in the capacious folds of his multi-hued cloak. “And it appears we’ve already found the reason why.”

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Steal of a Deal on Touch of a Thief!

Touch of a Thief by Mia Marlowe

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I love a good sale, don’t you? Well, here’s a FANTASTIC one! There’s a sale on for Touch of a Thief . You can buy the ebook version for just $1.99! It’s be available from:
Amazon
B & N
Kobo
Sony

(Update: We got off to a slow start, but as of 7:20pm Feb 13th, all the etailers are showing the correct $1.99 price. However, I was told it would only be a one day sale, so I don’t know how long the special price will be available. Hurry!)

At the end of December, Kensington ran a short sale like this, but my newsletter arrived too late for many of you to take advantage of the deal. So sorry. That’s why I’m letting you know a couple days early this time. Hope you’ll take this opportunity to share the info with your reading friends. The more the merrier, when it comes to great deals on eReads.

RegencyRomanceWriter.com gives Touch of a Thief “10 out of 10!” and Publishers Weekly honored this story with a rare starred review. I’d love to hear what YOU think!

Sins of the Highlander

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Of course, Touch of a Thief isn’t the only title of mine that’s available now. In fact, there are so many books I want to share with you, I hardly know where to start. Maybe by release date is the best way to go. Rob MacLaren and Elspeth Stewart’s love story came out in January. Heartfelt thanks to all who’ve let me know you loved Sins of the Highlander!

If you missed “Mad Rob” MacLaren’s tumultuous adventure with the abducted Elspeth, ask for it at your local bookseller or order it from all major etailers.

A Highlander, and especially a mad one, is a terrible thing to miss.

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Just this week, MaidenSong, my debut title, was reissued as an ebook. I love this story and am so excited to be able to offer it to you for your Kindle or Nook at a budget friendly price. Rika and Bjorn’s affair is not quite…safe. Here’s what RTBOOK Reviews has to say:

“From Scandinavia to the Byzantine slave markets, this steamy love story calls to mind the great mistresses of the genre: Small, Henley and Mason. Filled with forbid­den love, betrayal, redemption and hope.”

Touch of a Rogue

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And there are only a few more days till Touch of a Rogue’s release. The second book in the Touch of Seduction series will hit the bookstore shelves on February 28th, but in publishing parlance, it’s considered a March book. If you’ve read Touch of a Thief, you’ll enjoy seeing Viola and Quinn reappear briefly to help Jacob and Julianne discover the location of a mysterious magical dagger. But it’s not necessary to read the first in order to enjoy this stand alone story.

Find out why Publishers Weekly names this book one of its TOP TEN ROMANCES For SPRING 2012!

Happy Reading!

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Red Pencil Thursday

Red Pencil Thursday

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Welcome to another edition of my online critique group. Pour yourself a cup of coffee. Put up your feet and prepare to offer my volunteer, Jean Viola Ryan, your opinion about her first 500 words.

We do a critique of the beginning of a story because it’s such a delicate time. There’s so much that needs to be accomplished in those critical opening sentences. An author has to introduce the protagonist, set the mood, hint at the conflict and grab the reader with a strong hook.

Let’s see how Jeanie accomplished those goals.

Azazel’s Mark

Mia: Good title. It clearly says paranormal to me.

Things that change your life should be on the front page of the newspaper, not relegated to the obituaries, but Davey’s death was just one more in a long list of casualties who died for one thing…a mistake. Elizabeth grit her teeth and squeezed her eyes shut. She hadn’t been there when her brother had died, but his lifeless eyes haunted her. Something so green shouldn’t be so dead. Looking in the mirror was torture. She shared the same eyes, only hers were red rimmed from crying. She threw the paper across her bedroom.

Mia: I really like your first sentence, but I think it’s too long. If you put a period after obituaries and divide the sentence, it’ll pack more punch, IMO. I’m also a little confused. She wasn’t with Davey when he died, but she evidently saw his dead eyes somehow? The Prime Directive of prose is “First, be clear.” Be intentional about what you want to convey here. I like how you showed her frustration and grief with action rather than just telling us about it. Good job.

Jeanie: Thanks for where to break the opening sentence. It felt unwieldy, but I wasn’t sure how to fix it. I’ll work on making things clearer. It’s one of my weak points  .You are right. I need to include more details about Davey. I think I could see his eyes so clearly since he and Elizabeth share them, and I can see her clearly. More details will make him more real and her storyline is about her coming to terms with his death.

“Buck up, soldier.” She took a deep breath and squeezed her fists until her nails bit her palms. Davey had always hated seeing her upset. The only thing that could undo his steely demeanor was her tears.

Mia: I get that she’s talking to herself, but I wondered at first. It took me a bit to realize she’s the soldier. You want to raise questions in your readers’ minds, but you want them to wonder what’s going to happen next, not what’s happening right now. It pulls them out of the story, so I’d insert ‘she ordered herself’ after “Buck up, soldier.” Really good visceral details (fingernails biting her palms) that show how upset she is. Kudos.

Jeanie:   Thanks for the compliment. I think she needs a vocal cue to go with her dialogue. That will help the reader know she is talking to herself.

“I’m sorry,” she yelled to the heavens. “I’m trying, really I am.” She looked down, her hands clasped in her lap. Her thumb made circles on the back of her hand, like Davey used to. He’d always known when she’d needed comfort. It was like they were twins, even though he was five years older.

Mia: I don’t have a brother, so I don’t know if the circles on the back of her hand is normal, but it seems more like something a lover would do. A little too intimate for a sibling. If she’s in mourning, why is she alone? If she had a friend or relative with her, she could be talking to them instead of herself and the heavens. It’s  a really tough start to have a character by themselves. We need to see them in relation to others.

Jeanie: Does anyone have any suggestions on another gesture she does to console herself, something she does without even thinking? At this point she needs to be alone. She isn’t the kind to show her grief to anyone. She even backs out of going with her friends because it’s the anniversary of her brother’s death. She won’t be alone for long. In another page she is attacked when she goes running.

Mia: Oh! It’s been a year? This grief felt pretty fresh to me. Since you know she turned down a chance to go out with her friends, why not show her having a quick conversation with one. You can get plenty of internal dialogue to explain how and why she’s feeling tucked in between actual dialogue.

Tears clouded her vision, and she squeezed her eyes shut. She was not going to start crying again, dammit. The lump in her throat called her a liar. She needed to get out of there, do something, anything, to blot out those eyes. She grabbed her running shoes from under her bed and laid them on the bright pink flowered quilt her grandmother had made her. It so wasn’t her, but she wasn’t sure what was her anymore.

Mia: I’d start a new paragraph with The lump in her throat …. It’s a reversal and deserves a little more weight.

Her fixation with his eyes disturbs me a little because I don’t know why she’s honed in on this one thing. When I’ve lost someone, I remember so many things about them. I search my memory, pulling up every detail I can. I don’t remember ever focusing on one aspect of them. And when I find something that reminds me of them (as your heroine’s eyes remind her of her brother’s) I take comfort in that thing. It’s like a link with my lost love one. I need more info to know why his eyes are haunting her.

Jeanie: I like this suggestion. She is very real to me (I made a character collage of her before I started. She’s Jodie Foster with some changes). I need to do the same with Davey. I am fortunate not to have lost anyone close to me until recently, so thank you for explaining what it’s like.

She opened her nearly empty bottom drawer. It was past laundry day, so the only clean running shorts were the dark blue ones from her nearly four years at West Point. She stared at them, reaching out to touch them only to pull her hand away. Hell and no. There was no way she was ever putting those on again. She should throw them away or at least donate them, but she could no more part with them than she could the pristine uniform hanging in the back of her closet.

Mia: Not a happy soldier then. I wonder at her calling herself that earlier. I really like the way you’ve imbued the things in her surroundings with extra meaning—her grandmother’s quilt, the running shorts, her pristine uniform—to show us more about who Elizabeth is.

Jeanie: Thank you. In another page the action really picks up (she’s attacked). I was nervous about starting so slowly, but I really wanted the reader to know who Elizabeth is so they care about her when she’s attacked. I hoped I was drawing the reader in and not boring them.

It was too warm for sweats. Gone were chilly DC nights. She rummaged around in her hamper. At the bottom were her yellow ones. Such a cheery color was at odds with her mood. Besides, they reeked. Same with her black ones. If she wanted to go running, dark blue it was.

Mia: The sentence structure ‘Gone were…’ is too passive. Elizabeth is a girl of action and directness. Say it plainly. The chilly DC nights were gone. Again, brilliant use of color and objects to give us insight into her mood. ;-)

Jeanie: Thanks. I like that you know she is a girl of action and directness.

She tried to pull her black hair into a pony tail, but it was still a smidgen too short. All she needed was her iPod. It was waiting for her by the door, still in the arm band she strapped on. She looked around her apartment and could see Davey sitting on the couch, surveying the place, even though she’d moved here after his death. She really needed to get out of there now.

Mia: Most of the time, when we “see” our lost loved ones, it’s more that we catch a fleeting glimpse of them from the corner of our eyes. At least, it’s been that way for me. I could believe this more if she thought she saw him, then didn’t when she jerked her gaze toward him. I get that this is a paranormal story. With those parameters, I think you can be more explicit with what she experiences that’s outside the norm.

Jeanie: As I said before, I haven’t lost anyone until recently, so  I appreciate you describing how it is. Would anyone else care to share how it’s been for you. I like the fleeting glimpse. It is more powerful.

Mia: Intriguing beginning, Jeanie. There are some solid elements of good prose here.

Jeanie: Thank you for doing this.  I’ve been working on showing emotion.

Jeanie Viola RyanJean Viola Ryan’s Bio: Jean Viola Ryan is an active member of RWA, including the Fantasy, Futuristic and Paranormal chapter as well as Maryland and New England chapters. When she doesn’t have her nose buried in a good book or isn’t living in the paranormal worlds she creates, she moderates workshops for Savvy Authors and the Muse Online Writers Conference.

When asked why she’s lived up and down the East Coast, she explains, “My husband is in the Coast Guard, and he tends to guard the coast.”

Find Jean on Facebook , and her website.

The book is Azazel’s Mark and the series is The Mark of Abel. It is
paranormal romance. The tag line is: One of the last female
descendants of Abel, a West Point drop-out, must sacrifice everything
to save her estranged military family from the fallen angels
responsible for Abel’s death.

Mia: Happy Dance Warning! Jean shared that she just received an offer for the first book in the Mark of Abel series! Woot!

Would you like to be a Red Pencil Thursday volunteer? Check out the details!

Now it’s YOUR turn. What suggestions or questions do you have for Jean?

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MaidenSong

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Exciting News!

I’m thrilled to share that MaidenSong (my debut title) is now available for your Kindle or Nook for a budget-pleasing $2.99! If you missed this story when it was first published in 2006, here’s your chance to live Bjorn and Rika’s sensual adventure. Check out an excerpt from Maidensong for a love story where more than hearts are at risk. Enjoy!

“From Scandinavia to the Byzantine slave markets, this steamy love story calls to mind the great mistresses of the genre: Small, Henley and Mason. Filled with forbid­den love, betrayal, redemption and hope.”—RTBookReviews

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Being a Writer

“All good books are alike in that they are truer than if they had really happened and after you are finished reading one, you will feel that all that happened to you and afterward  it all belongs to you: the good and the bad, the ecstasy, the remorse and sorrow, the people and the places and how the weather was. If you can get so that you can give that to people, then you are a writer.” ~ Hemingway

I would amend that quote only a little to say “after you are finished writing one you will feel that all that happened to you…” I certainly felt like that after I finished Maidensong, my debut title. I lived Bjorn and Rika’s adventure, down the wild rivers of Europe to an exotic southern city that was filled with treachery and danger. I experienced their hopeless love, their angst, their despair and their triumph. It was, as we say in writer circles, “the book of my heart.”

It was also my first professional vindication. Someone (Dorchester) wanted to publish it in 2006 and was willing to pay me for the privilege. It was a huge milestone for my writing life and my first foray into the maelstrom of publishing. I was a “real” writer.

I love this story and was so excited to regain the rights to Maidensong so I can offer it to you as an affordable ebook.

I’ve had a wonderful time going back through this story, tweaking here and there, adding new material and becoming reacquainted with Rika and Bjorn and their Dark Ages world.  Be sure to pop back by in the next few days. My webmistress will have a new book page for it with a longer excerpt, but for now, I’ll just leave you with a little of the opening:

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The babe wailed again.

“There, lamb,” Helge whispered as she sponged the last of the slick fluids off the enraged little body. Flickering light from the central fire kissed the newborn and danced across the smoke-blackened beams of the longhouse.

The old midwife sighed. However difficult the babe’s entry into the world had been, she was at least a healthy child, perfectly formed with all her fingers and toes. A crest of coppery hair was plastered to her damp head.

“Hush you, now,” Helge coaxed.

The wrinkled little face puckered and the newborn shrieked as if Loki, the trickster godling, had just pinched her bottom. Helge wrapped the child snugly in a cat-skin blanket, crooning urgent endearments.

“Shut the brat up,” Torvald said, his voice a broken shadow of its usual booming timbre. All the souls sheltered in the longhouse went expectantly silent. As if she sensed menace in the air, the child subsided into moist hiccups.

“Will you not hold your daughter?” Helge offered the small bundle to Torvald. “She’s a fine child, fair and lusty.”

“No, I’ll not.” Torvald knuckled his eyes. “She’s killed my Gudrid. I’ll have naught to do with her.” When he looked at the mewling babe, his face was a mask of loathing. “Put her out.”

Helge flinched. “But, my lord—”

“Don’t argue with me, woman. Am I not chief over my own house?” Torvald’s gray eyes blazed with a potent mix of fury and grief. “I said, put her out.”

Helge’s shoulders sagged. She couldn’t remember the last time a healthy child had been exposed. But Torvald was master here, so there was nothing for it but to do his bidding.

Still, it didn’t seem right to consign the babe to Hel empty-handed. It was bad enough that she’d go unloved and unmourned to that shadowy, icy place. Even worse, she’d arrive there as a pauper.

Helge laid her little charge on the bedding, and untied the thin strip of leather from the dead woman’s slim neck.

The pendant was a simple little amber hammer, its only distinctive mark a tiny purple orchid trapped forever in the glowing stone. Perhaps Thor would mark the child for his protection if she met her death wearing his talisman. It wasn’t much, but it was all Helge could do for the mite.

She bundled herself against the cold and left the longhouse bearing her whimpering burden. The stiff hairs in her nostrils froze with each breath.

The thought of leaving the child for the wolves made Helge’s chest constrict smartly. She decided to let the sea take her. It would be clean and quick. There’d be less chance of hearing the child’s keening death wail on the wind. And the unhappy little soul would find it harder to trouble those who’d disowned her with malicious tricks later, as some malevolent ghosts were known to do.

Snow crunched underfoot as Helge trudged down to the shore where the fjord was choked with ice. Armed with an ax she picked up as she passed the woodpile, Helge carried the babe as close to the edge of the floe as she dared.

“Good-bye, little elf,” Helge said as she placed the newborn on the smooth, cold surface. “Thor keep you, for I cannot.”

She brought the sharp ax down with a thwack. The brittle ice shattered in a jagged line and separated from the main body of the floe. Helge gave it a nudge with the ax handle.

She watched with a gathering heaviness in her chest as, bobbing and dipping, the tiny bundle on the ice sheet floated out with the tide.

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Red Pencil Thursday Rides Again!

Red Pencil Thursday

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It’s been several months since we had a Red Pencil Thursday, but if I don’t have a volunteer, we can’t have our online critique group. Fortunately, Suzan Tisdale has stepped forward with the first 500 words of her work in progress.

The opening of any novel is such a delicate time. Seeds of the character arcs, the conflict, the whole story is here in nascent form. That’s why we focus on the opening for Red Pencil Thursday. If you’d like to participate, please click on the red pencil to pop over for the details of how YOU can find yourself in the hotseat.

Findley’s Lass

Mia: The purpose of a title is to set a mood, convey what sort of story you’re offering, or pose a question in your readers’ minds. I like this title. We know it’s a Highland setting and you’ve set us up for a love story with the possessive.

Time had suspended for an interminable length before his heart beat again.  Even longer before he could draw a breath. Only sons of whores would attack and kill a group of auld people, set their home ablaze and leave the bodies for the wolves and carrions. He didn’t need the bit of bloodied fabric clenched in his fist to tell him who was responsible for the massacre that lay before him.  Buchannans were the only clan in all of Scotland capable of such atrocity. The bit of Buchannan plaid they had found skittering in the breeze merely clarified their suspicions and sealed the fate of the Buchannan chief. The man would be dead within a fortnight if Findley McKenna had anything to say on the matter.

Mia: OK, we have a vivid, dramatic scene here, but it has no voice. By that I mean we don’t know who’s head we’re in right away, so while we’re appalled at the carnage, we can’t feel Findley’s rage as much as if you let us get under his skin and see the whole scene through his eyes. Close POV draws a reader in, makes us part of the action. One of the best ways to do that is to give us some dialogue. Give your hero someone to talk to. Try this:

Findley McKenna clenched the bloodied fabric in his fist. Old people killed, their home set ablaze and …. (insert your short description of the scene as Findley would think it. This is key. Use his words, show the details he’d notice instead of painting the broader canvas of an omniscient narrator.) “Only sons of whores would do such a thing.”

“Buchannans, ye mean,” said (Findley’s as yet unnamed friend.)

I wouldn’t mention Buchannans till their name comes up in conversation. And save the fact that he’ll kill their chieftain to use as an end of scene hook.

Notorious for lying, cheating and stealing, the Buchannans were rapidly becoming more than just a pain in the arses of their neighboring clans: they were a plague on the whole of Scotland.  Their only allegiance was to themselves and the side with the most coin.

Mia: We got it in the first paragraph. The Buchannans are real bad actors. You’re beating the reader over the head with it here. I’d salt these details in later, preferably in dialogue so it’s your character’s opinion, not the narrator’s. If you do it that way, you’re showing rather than telling—almost always the better choice.

Plus, be aware that every villain is a hero in his own story. The Buchannans are just taking care of their own, albeit at the expense of everyone else. So while they are undoubtedly heinous, make sure you give them at least one good quality—family loyalty, for example. Otherwise, your villains will be cartoonish. Think of Magneto in X-Men. Undoubtedly a bad guy, but he’s out to save mutants from genocide (a noble goal). It’s his method of reaching the goal that makes him a villain.

Now Findley and his men stood in the aftermath of what had once been Maggie Boyle’s home and Maggie and her boys were no where to be found.  Three years past a pox had taken nearly every member of Maggie’s clan. All that had remained was a handful of auld people, Maggie and her boys.

His feelings for Maggy had been unspoken, but his men could easily surmise that Findley held very strong affections towards the widowed mum. They hadn’t travelled these many days just to bring supplies to her motley clan and an offer to foster her sons.  Maggie had inexplicably won Findley’s heart.

Mia: Oh! This needs to be closer to the beginning! Our hero’s heart is engaged, not just his righteous indignation over the atrocity. Don’t let there be surmising. This is too good a hook to pass by lightly. Strong emotion is the strongest hook a writer can set. If he harbors tender feelings for her that colors the whole scene. He should be tearing through the wreckage, trying to find her, afraid he will.

BTW, I like that you haven’t succumbed to the temptation to make the heroine a Buchannan. ‘My-clan-hates-your-clan’ is a little tired as a conflict. Kudos for avoiding it.

Findley could not explain his intense attraction for the auburn haired woman with the bright green eyes, for they had spent but a few short hours together the past spring and under less than desirable circumstances. It had been her five boys that had set in motion the events that led up to rescuing a severely battered young lass from a fate worse than death.

Mia: You’re trying to insert too much backstory here. We have a smoking ruin before us. We can’t be dragged into the past right now. Especially not since we don’t know if Maggie’s body is among the fallen. Concentrate on how he’s feeling. Here’s where time is suspended and he can’t draw a breath.

You need to know Findley and Maggie’s history. The reader doesn’t at this point. Modern readers expect us to hit the ground running. Ask yourself if the reader needs this information in order to continue reading with understanding. If the answer is ‘no,’ save it for later.

Also ‘fate worse than death’ is a tired euphemism for being raped. If that’s the case, I’d rather you said so instead of using coy substitutes. These are Highlanders, not Victorians. Straight talk is the order of the day.

Had Maggie Boyle’s young sons not stolen some thirty head of cattle from his clan, then he and his friend Duncan McEwan would not have been there to rescue the lass from the freezing stream.  Had the boys not stolen the cattle then Aishlinn and Duncan would not now be blissfully married and expecting their first bairn.  And had the boys not stolen the cattle, Findley would never have met their mother who had unwittingly stolen his heart. And his soul would not be shredding into an infinite number of pieces with worry over her.

Mia: We have no idea who Duncan or Aishlinn are or why we should care about them. I’d X them out here. I need to see Findley in action, showing us that his heart is shredding rather than having you tell us it is. What is he doing? Who is he talking with? Where is he looking for Maggie?

Maggie had somehow managed to keep her clan together and alive, no small feat considering all she’d been through.  Perhaps it was admiration for her tenacity and strength that drew his heart to her.  Or perhaps he hoped that by helping Maggie and her people he could in some small measure make up for failing his own family some ten and seven years ago.

Mia: Making up for a past mistake is a good motivator for a hero’s action, but at this point, we need more action and less motivation. Your narrative needs to move us forward, not backward in these critical first 500 words.

You may feel I’ve been tough on you, Suzan and I have. But that’s because I sense that there’s a viable kernel of a strong story here. It’s locked inside you and I’d love to see you bring it out. Don’t be afraid to climb inside your character’s heads and take us with you. Try rewriting this opening using only dialogue and action, not looking back for anything. I bet the result will feel more immediate, more gripping. Then if you feel it absolutely necessary, sprinkle in a few teasers about your backstory. Let me know what you think about your changes.

Good luck and keep writing!

Suzan lives in the Midwest with her verra handsome carpenter husband, the last of their four children. Their youngest, a 6’1”, 14-year-old boy is eating them out of house and home. Monetary donations are currently being accepted in order to feed their built-like-a-linebacker son and keep him in shoes.

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Mia: Usually my RPT volunteers simply respond to my comments, but Suzan sent me back a new version of her opening incorporating some of my suggestions. The whole point of a critique is to start thinking in new directions. Let’s see what Suzan did with her story:

Findley McKenna gripped the bloodied plaid until his knuckles turned white. Time had suspended for an interminable length before his heart beat again. Even longer before he could draw a breath. “Only sons of whores would kill auld people, set their home ablaze and leave the bodies for the wolves and carrions.” Findley spoke through gritted teeth. Rage, as hot as a blacksmith’s forge pounded through his veins.

Findley blinked and drew his lips into a hard, thin line. His feelings for Maggy had been unspoken, but his men could easily surmise that Findley held very strong affections towards the widowed mum. They hadn’t travelled these many days with heavy wagons just to bring supplies to her motley clan and an offer to foster her sons. Maggy had inexplicably won Findley’s heart.

“Buchannans done this,” Wee William said with much contempt in his voice. Wee William had seen much death and destruction in his lifetime, as had Findley. Death on the battlefield however, was a far cry from the butchery that surrounded them.

“Search again,” he ordered his men through gritted teeth.

Findley tore through the blackened tents and the charred remains of Maggy’s hut. He lifted the trestle table and tossed it aside as if it weighed no more than the bloodied fabric clenched between his fingers. Anger, disgust and worry filled him to the marrow as he kicked through the blankets and debris, searching for her, but all the while praying his search would not find her, not here, not among the dead.

He knew his heart would not be able to withstand finding her burned corpse. But the alternative was worse. If she was alive, she was in the hands of a soulless bastard who would either imprison her for his own purposes or take her to the slave traders in the high north. The vision of Maggy being stripped, thrown into chains and put on display to be sold to the highest bidder tore through his heart with as much force as an enemy’s sword. The damage would be the same either way, for there would be no repairing his destroyed heart.

Sweat covered his brow and ran the length of his back, plastering his tunic to his chest and arms. His lungs fought for clean air for the cloying stench of decayed bodies hung thick all around him. His heart pounded mercilessly in his chest, threatening to burst as his thoughts of what Maggy had gone through, of what she might be going through would not relent no matter how hard he prayed. He felt his very soul dying with each beat of his heart.

When his frenzied search yielded no sign of the auburn haired woman who had stolen his heart months ago, his heart finally conceded to what his mind had been telling him. The Buchannans had her. They had Maggy and her boys.

Mia: Lots more emotion in this version, Suzan. There’s more action, less telling and there’s a sense that the story is advancing faster. All good things! Thanks for sharing your revisions with us.

Now it’s YOUR turn to weigh in. Do you have suggestions for Suzan?

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Winners!

Touch of a Thief by Mia MarloweSins of the HighlanderLots of readers popped by my blog for the Romance at Random Reader Rally Blog Hop. There are two winners from that event: Tanja H will receive a signed Touch of a Thief (Book One in my Touch of Seduction series!) and Nat scored the signed Sins of the Highlander.

I’ve had a recent blog guest who gave prizes. Martha Lawson and Jeanne Miro were Diane Amos’s winners. In the weeks to come, I’ll be hosting more authors on Mondays. Be sure to pop by to see who’s visiting.

And I’m happy to report that Red Pencil Thursday is making a comeback. I have my first intrepid volunteer for our online critique group. Be sure to pop back by for a peek behind the curtain at the writer’s craft. And if you’re an aspiring author, or even a published one, be sure to check out the details on how you can participate!

Today is the final stop for my Sins of the Highlander blog tour. Hope you’ll join me at Limecello for 2 chances to win this exciting read. See you there!

And finally….drumroll, please… congratulations to Jenafer H of Spring Green, Wisconsin! She’s the winner of my Kindle contest! If you didn’t win, don’t despair. I’ll be staring another contest with another terrific prize very soon.

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Publishers Weekly Top 10 Romances for Spring!

Touch of a Rogue

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I’m thrilled to share that Touch of a Rogue was named one of Publishers Weekly’s Top Ten Romances for Spring (Jan-June 2012). My head was spinning when I checked out the other authors named. The list is filled with writers whose work I’ve admired for years (most notably Mary Jo Putney who graciously gave me a cover quote for Touch of a Scoundrel, coming later this summer!) as well as one debut author.

My two publishers are well-represented on the list. Kensington claimed four spots and Sourcebooks was awarded two. There’s a generous mix of contemporary and historical, paranormal and suspense. Be sure to mark your calendars because you won’t want to miss a single one!

PW’s Top 10: Romance

A Perfect Storm by Lori Foster. HQN, Apr.

Before She Dies by Mary Burton. Kensington/Zebra, Feb.

A Secret in Her Kiss by Anna Randol. Avon, Feb.

No Longer a Gentleman by Mary Jo Putney. Kensington/Zebra, May.

Touch of a Rogue by Mia Marlowe. Kensington/Brava, Mar.

Firelight by Kristen Callihan. Grand Central/Forever, Feb.

Enraptured by Elisabeth Naughton. Sourcebooks Casablanca, Apr.

Born to Darkness by Suzanne Brockmann. Ballantine, Mar.

Miss Hillary Schools a Scoundrel by Samantha Grace. Sourcebooks Casablanca, Feb.

Sweet Stuff by Donna Kauffman. Kensington/Brava, Feb

If you subscribe to Publishers Weekly, you can see what lovely things they had to say about our books here.

When I’m deep into writing a book, I’m a terrible judge of my own work. By the time I turn it in, I’m usually convinced it’s pure crap. No one was more surprised than me when my editor, the lovely and talented Alicia Condon, told me Touch of a Rogue was the best thing I’d ever written. Bet she feels vindicated!

Lest you think I suffer alone from chronic low self-esteem, let me share that I’ve never met a writer who felt otherwise about her own work. Self-doubt seems to be a communicable disease in the writing community.  Second guessing myself is second nature. But maybe we need that nagging internal editor to drive us to always strive to put our finest work on the page, to be dissatisfied with merely good enough.

So now that I’ve basked in the sunlight of approbation for a bit, it’s time to slink back to my writing chair and immerse myself in my current WIP again.

Which, as you may have guessed, I’m convinced is crap. ;-)

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Reader Rally!

Welcome! If you landed here, you’re in the right place. I’m part of Romance at Random’s Reader Rally Blog Hop!

Usually authors offer excerpts from their books, but I’m going to be a little different. (My regular visitors will shrug and say, “So what else is new?”) I’m sharing snippets instead, just the beginning of a few chapters. Here goes:

Sins of the Highlander

Sins of the Highlander

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Chapter One ~ The peat fire had burned out and the ash gone gray, but Rob MacLaren didn’t feel the least bit cold. Not while his hot-blooded woman writhed under him.

Chapter Two ~ Rob advanced steadily, steeling himself to ignore the way her brows drew together in fear. “A man doesna name a horse he might have to eat come winter,” he said, his voice silky with menace. “And he doesna befriend one he’s taken hostage.”

Chapter Three ~ Elspeth Stewart blinked at him, like a small brown squirrel caught in the gaze of an adder.

Chapter Four ~ When Mad Rob decided to leave a place, he didn’t let anything slow him down. In the black cave, Elspeth couldn’t see her own hand when she held it before her face, but the Maclaren seemed to know exactly where he was going.

Chapter Five ~ “Wine!” Lord Drummond bellowed as he entered the solar.

Old Normina shuffled forward with a horn and a wineskin of the best vintage to be found in the laird’s cellars. She’d anticipated he’d demand more than mead this night after chasing all over creation for his lost bride.

Chapter Six ~ Lachlan Drummond and Elspeth’s father reined their horses to a halt at the top of the rise. The sun eased over the southeastern hills but it promised no additional warmth. The day was breaking cold and bitter as a spinster’s bed.

Midway through Chapter Six ~ Elspeth screamed. The last thing she saw before Rob and the wolf disappeared into the brush was his long claymore flying into the air, end over end.

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